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[lauraredcloud]

Thank you for allowing me to consider your work. I had the chance to read it and while I enjoy the premise, I didn't feel the execution made the book stand out from others in its category. Therefore I must pass on offering representation. Best of luck with your writing career.

Either less or more detail, dude!

Comments

from Anna

[(Anonymous)]

Buuuurn! Which one was this?

Either way, your reply should be, "Are you sure? Have you read Twilight???"

Re: from Anna

[laura-redcloud.livejournal.com]

The first one. I never finished the second one. And, in fact, I haven't sent it out in months, this person just took a super long time.

Meet your cowriter!!!!

from Alison!

[(Anonymous)]

UHM... Has she/he read the book where, y'know, the girl is just a normal average girl and she wants to be popular, but like this mopey misunderstood boy likes her even though she like mostly ignores him in her pursuit to be toootally popular but then at the end when she burns all her former friends and the popular clique-slash-quarterback like totally ditches her, she realizes what a totally awesome guy the mopey kid is and they like totally hook up?
No?
I feel like I've read that one before, maybe. WTF. Seriously dude, your stuff is great. Pay no mind.